As a mom to a five-year-old boy,
I’m constantly making trips to the library to get out books on naughty
dinosaurs, blue monsters and run-away dump trucks. Children’s picture books is
an area where I break my steadfast rule about only reading non-fiction. And I
usually only have enough time in there – between avoiding knocking over the
fish tank while wrestling with a screaming newborn – to select books based on
the quality of their illustrations, often just the one on the front. To choose
books by their cover.
The proverbial warning is so
true. Because I pay for my superficiality by getting home and being continually
disappointed by the quality of the writing. On average, only three out of the
twenty books we’ve chosen are truly worth rereading. Despite the pretty
pictures.
Of course, this has made me – a
wannabe writer – want to write my own children’s books. How hard could it be?
After all, I make up stories every night after the lights are out and some of
them even have a beginning, middle and end (though no one is awake to
hear it).
But apart from cool
illustrations, I’m not sure what the ingredients are for a great children’s
book. What is the magic formula used in books like Room on the Broom (by
Julia Donaldson) and Say Hello to Zorro (by Carter Goodrich), and
because we own a fine collection of Italian-language story books, I’ll also add
something like Il Signor Tazzina (by Maria Sole Macchia)?
But if the magic formula were
that easy, everyone would be writing and publishing children’s books. In the
wild hope that an overnight inspiration – and a couple days’ work – could turn
into an overnight sensation.
Perhaps all I can do for now to
get anywhere close to the magic ingredients to an amazing children’s book –
apart from funky pictures – is to work out what they are not. Here’s my
list thus far of things I can’t stand in a children’s book:
·
protagonists named Tommy or Billy
·
a spelled-out moral at the end
·
forced rhyme, especially where word order rules are
broken just to make something rhyme
·
onomatopoeia – zip, screech, brrr, zoom, plop plop
·
too much dialogue – with all the different voices
required (high-pitched, gravelly, Southern accent, etc.), this just makes more
work for tired parents
·
overly poetic feel-good plots with no beginning, middle
or end
·
serious plots (the girl in wheelchair, grandpa dying,
etc.)
·
geographically misplaced animals
·
finding out, in the end, that it was all made up (isn’t
Billy an imaginative little chap?)
Can you add any pet hates? Or
what, for you, is a magic ingredient?
